If you can’t spend too much for copy but still want a top-notch page, want the opinion of a professional, or simply want to make sure your site is perfectly optimized before you start sending massive traffic to it, then this is for you.
With your order, Rachel will personally go through and give an in-depth analysis of your site. She’ll thoroughly go through your site from top to bottom, including:
Buying words you should be using to get people to perform the calls to action you want
Your “call to action” pages and why or why not they’re effective
Specific phrases you should test compared to what you have
Your site demographics and how you can appeal to them (yes… she can tell that! ;))
And much, much more.
You can also ask her specific questions on the critiques, and they apply to both “sales copy” pages and traditional websites.
Here’s what some people said about Rachel’s critiques:
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“I know it will make a difference to the sales…” “Rachel, your video critique was worth the money for the whole mastermind group. I have learned a lot from the 5 videos you sent and I know it will make a difference to the sales, thank you.”-Steven Atchison Editor’s note: The mastermind group cost $1397. |
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“…A great critique. I’m certainly going to work on the tips that you suggested.” “Ouch, poor Brian. You just tore his copy to bits. That is a great critique though… I’m certainly going to work on the tips that you suggested . I’ll show you the sales copy after I make the changes. Thanks again for this critique… I love it!” -Adam Fletcher |
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“Your feedback is excellent.” “Thank you for making time to review my paper. Being new to all this, one doesn’t now just how to approach some of these things. Your feedback is excellent and I’ll make the changes you’ve suggested.” - Dean H. |
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“I’m going to learn a lot from you. ” I hadn’t gotten back to you yet because I’ve been swamped but I wanted to tell you that I REALLY appreciate the critique. You say everything so clearly. I can tell I’m going to learn a lot from you :)” - Jenn D. |
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“Great comments, Rachel!” “Great comments Rachel, Many thanks. I appreciate the positive comments and the constructive suggestions. I’ll make what changes I can before the hotseat on Wednesday. That means I’ll probably focus on the words and get the layout changes done later. I really appreciate it.” -Robert G. |
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“Most sincerely, I love it!” “Holy Jamoly!!!! I never expected all that in a million years!!!
You KNOW how much I appreciate it as my Sales Copy is not my strong suit…and obviously, it is yours!!!
Thank you, Rachel… I’m implementing it ALL…except changing my ebook title…but I get right where you’re coming from and where that could be confusing as to the way I had certain things worded in the Sales letter….and I’ll change that around so it makes sense, more continuity.
Thank you again for all of this…most sincerely…I love it!
Thrilled in Wisconsin with your critique!”
- Marijo J. |
Each critique is $197, and WELL worth it.
Once you sign up, we recommend scheduling some time to make all your changes! 
